Keno Cooper and the Fly, page 5

November 21st, 2010, 6:05 pm

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Reply NtKGar, November 21st, 2010, 3:23 pm

It was my niece's second birthday over the weekend, so in lieu of a comic today, here's a children's book! Happy birthday Nessa!

The first page is [here]

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Reply Luio (Guest), November 21st, 2010, 10:25 pm

Happy Birthday Happy Birthday Gar's niece ^-^ We wish you a nice birthday weekend <3

Reply GabrielsThoughts, November 22nd, 2010, 8:21 am

five stars my friend.

Reply mina (Guest), November 22nd, 2010, 7:16 pm

a tiny note from a tiny fan ^_^ I love the book. I think it would be cool if you actually look into publishing it. Neko the kitty is awesome and although some comics would not make it into newspapers (due to graphicness) I think it seriously will do well.

Reply Rae (Guest), November 23rd, 2010, 12:05 am

O.o My name is Nessa!!! lol but i am much older then two haha.
Loved this!!! read it to my lil neighbour too she loved it as well, wanted to read more Nekos but I told her that was all haha.

Reply NtKGar, November 23rd, 2010, 3:27 am

Ah the perils of going all Dr Seuss in the middle of a comic featuring adult language and Cockleigh. (Although it's not Keno's first foray into poetry g-styrofoam/ )

I'll probably break this down to one-image-per-page and try to publish it in the new year as a stand-alone thing for kids. If anyone knows the contact details of a publishing house who do kids books and would let me keep the rights to the character, let me know. I could use their resources and distribution channels. If not then I'll just self-publish a limited run and sell it through the site.

Reply Puppy_Luv, June 4th, 2011, 4:12 pm

fucking adorable :3

Reply DrakeFeatherwing, June 14th, 2012, 2:12 pm

First page: And Here:

And Here, too:

Last one:

I kid Gar, I know you were busy, I saw no link to page one in any of your comments, but I knew roughly what you meant.

Reply onewhitejade, October 13th, 2014, 3:06 am

Suggestion Kitty sniffs his latest prey,
Doesn't eat it.
Walks away.

I suggest this change because it better carries the strong rhythm of the poem, brings it to a firm conclusion, and eliminates the unnecessary weaker phrase 'decides not to' and the unneeded connector 'and'.

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